麻烦修改这两篇英文日记,August 23.2009 Sunday SunnyIt is a fine day toda

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  • August 23.2009 Sunday Sunny

    It is a fine day today.

    After dinner,my mother and I walked on xx road.On the bridge,I saw a little girl climed the guardrail,and I saw a very lovely dog.It was the smallest dog I have ever seen.

    Today I made a learning program.I must improve my English.

    August 24.2009 Monday Sunny

    When we walked on the way home,I saw a old man in the square.Although he was over seventy years old,he was still active.He danced among a large crowd of young people and he looked very healthy.

    I hadn't play the violin for a few days,so tomorrow I will practice it for an hour.

    注意一些大小写,标点,连词,不适合的形容词等等.