My Good Classmate
My good classmate, Li Lin, who is 16 years old , isn’t tall and is always dressed simply . She works so hard and always tries her best to finish her homework by herself that she does well in all the subjects. She is kind to any persons and she is ready to help others. She is good at English and she always helps the classmates who are poor in English with English. She has many hobbies, such as music and sports.
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