Question

这句英文语法正确否？include运用合适否？谢谢指教！

Answer 1

including。。。。现在分词短语作后置定语

These methods是主语 including electro deposition , ion exchange, membrane separation, chemical precipitation as metal hydroxide , reverse osmosis , flocculation and adsorption 是定语have been applied是谓语.

1）have been applied 之前加上“, which.”正确，是分隔式 定语从句。先行词与定从之间插入了谓语

=These methods which have been applied include electro deposition , ion exchange, membrane separation, chemical precipitation as metal hydroxide , reverse osmosis , flocculation and adsorption

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2）include 后面可以带多个并列的宾语

如His writings include poetry and prose.

他的作品包括诗和散文。