From the perspective(opion) of past generations like our grandparents or even parents,they perceive(think) that comparing with(instead of)spending (the)delete money on entertaining(entertainment),they would rather deposit their money in (the)delete bank.However,
in contemporary society,the majority of youngsters like me( feel )delete strongly (about)delete
agree(ing)delete with the statement that people should spend their money more on
traveling and vocation.(than others)
For the senior citizens,having the impulse to go cannot be the decisive reason for them to
take the action.Taking numerous responsibilities,they are enabled to think
comprehensively when facing the choices.Once,I asked my parents about their views on this question,they said when they
were in my age,they have(had) the same feeling of intense eagering to explore the world.Nevertheless,as they
grow(grew) old,they begin(began) to worry about their physical condition(s),their family,
including both their children and parents.Their experiences present me with a
convincing fact that pushes me
to ponder whether I will have the
courage to begin my journey if I were in their age.
Therefore,it
becomes clear to me about which way I should go,spending or saving.From my
point of view,people who choice(choose) to deposit thier money can be generalized into
the proposition of pursuing a better life.But when
under a further discussion,the sufficient
capital,if not make use of,is merely a number on one's credit card.
Furthermore,when one has traveled around,it can help he or she establish a solid foundation
into his or her future career for the rich experiences,thus,he or she may
well have the capability and competitive edge to earn the money back.For
example,when I took the English
writing class,the teacher there is(was) a considerably exceptional person.Through
his speech,I can(could) tell a man with confidence and well-informed.Later on,when
he talked about his stories,we all amazed at how valiant he is(was) for he had been to several countries to study and
work(ed) alone during his university years.His charming personality can be imputed to what he underwent and
that leaves a deep impression on me.
In a nutshell,I believe that people should fly to the place where they longing
for when such ideas come into mind.
Investing your
money on travel can in many ways benefit your life and leave with no regrets.
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