1.more去掉,greater后面加in xxx（任意国家）
2.now varieder改成more varied
3.telecommunications networks改成systems of telecommunications
4.most high改成highest
5.that改成than
6.cosmopolitanest前面加the
7.more改成much
8.high改成higher后面再加in xxx（任意国家）
9.quick改成quickly than
10.that改成as,bigger改成biggest
11.were改成more,informations改成单数,metting改成meeting(笔误?)
12.were改成is
13.what改成that
14.hear改成hearing
15.normally改成normal
16.interesting改成interested in
17.finishing改成finish,on time改成in time
18.Whos改成Whose
19.bases改成is based on
20.as改成than
21.checking改成checked
22.does it改成is it
23.more去掉
24.many改成much
25.said改成told
错误的原因不知道的话可以留言给我,一起交流.