小学五年级英语作文.老师出了一篇名为(dream)的英语作文,请各位帮我找一下错误,感谢每一个人!DreamI have

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  • I have a dream that is get into Columbia University, a great university in the financial center of the world.

    改为:I have a dream that i can get into Columbia University,which is a great university in the financial center of the world..

    when I had first known that university it was loved by me. 改为:On hearing the university,i fell in love it immediately.

    第三句,我没有明白你写的意思呀.

    第四句:i will succeed if the bright wisdom can be embedded in my mind.

    第五句:In order to achieve my goal,i have been studying very hard for a long time every day.

    第六句:i can still remember what Mrs. Clinton said to me ,she said you can make your dream come ture if you put your heart into it,which i will believe forever.

    第七句:this is my dream,it is a young dream, but it is very bright for me.of course,the darkness will eliminate one day.

    望采纳.3Q