把这篇英语文章的错误找出来这是我在今天英语作文竞赛中写的,题目是自我介绍,我是初一的.大家帮我把错误找出来啊!Hello

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  • Hello!Everybody.Do you want to know me?Now Follow (with)me!(最后一句不知道用得对不对?)

    My name is XXX.I’m twelve years old.Now I study atXXX School.I am in Class x,Grade Seven.I have a round face,small eyes,a big nose and a wide mouth.I'm very short and thin.My hobby

    is (I like) play(ing) computer,read(ing) books and play(ing) football.My favorite color is blue.Rong Zuer is my favorite singer!My favorite movie star is Cheng Long.My character are (I'm)lively and active.I like English very much.My English teacher is Miss X .She is a good teacher!She is thin.She has a long face and small ears.Her hair is long and her eyes are big.I will study English hard!

    Do you want to make friends with me?If you want to make friends with me.Please call me.My telephone number is XXXXXXX.

    有错误的地方改在括号里了