病句比较多!逐行帮你改一遍吧.主要问题是成分不清,词法不规范,逻辑不明确,行文累赘.
The company takes the technical improvements as impetus,continually intensifies technical reforms and rises integrated technical and equipment level by importing international advanced equipment.Meanwhile, the compamy develops and manufactures domestic advanced equipment as well.
The company maintains a leading position of tecnology and equipment level in domestic business line and holds a productive advantage of constructing long length,high tensile strength,complexly multiwire and large diameter steel wire rope with a range of domestic and international advanced equipment,for example:LZ-9/1200 type wire drawing machine,GG36/500 wire strand machine,MKVS48/500 rope strand machine,KTB36/630 stranding machine for full locked coil steel wire rope,MKVS12/630 stranding machine for multilayer steel wire rope, domestic large-size SK8/1650 steel wire rope stranding machine,steel wire rope pretensioning machine,low relaxation PC strand stabilizing produce line, abnormity steel wire drawing machine,ect.
有一些地方根本就不能按原文的基础来改了,只好重弄一遍!这个如果是公司要用的那确实得谨慎对待!不清楚的地方再给我留言!