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Recreational Activities
With the development of science and technology,more and more recreational activities are brought to our attention.There are varieties of recreational activities including sports,computer games and listing to music.
Just as the saying goes,every coin has two sides.People with different backgrounds would put different interpretations on the same case.At present,some people hold the belief that recreation will be helpful if we keep healthy physically and mentally.Amusements are able to decrease the stress which comes from the work and study in life.Nevertheless,other people set forth completely different argument concerning this issue.They examine this problem from another angle that these activities bring many troubles.If we spend too much time on recreational activities such as sports or computer games,we might fail to concentrate on our duties such as studying and working,which in turn may lead to further serious consequences.
In my opinion,whether it is good or bad depends on how we look at and deal with it.I am in favor of the former.As long as arranging the time concerned reasonably,we are sure to benefit more from recreational activities.
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