Question

短文改错 10处 I went to Christmas shopping with my mom yesterday

Answer 1

I went to (1.去掉to) Christmas shopping with my mom yesterday.When we finished shopping,my mother asked me (2.此处加上if或whether) I wanted anything else.I nod (用一般过去时态nodded) immediately as I remembered my good friends (3.friend用单数) Wang Lin,whose mother died last year.He didn't have a coat.But (4.意思不是转折,而是顺承,But 改为 So) I decided to buy one for he (5.用宾格him).I told my mom which (6.改为 what) I thought.She was very delighted and given (7.一般过去时,用gave) me 200 yuan.With the money,I bought a black coat for Wang Lin.This morning,I wrapped the coat on (8.改为in,包在纸张里面) Christmas paper and wrote "To Wang Lin,From Santa Claus" on it.I'm very happy that I could do anything (9.改为something,肯定句) for him.我只能找到9处错误.也许第10处把最后一句中的 could 改为 can,意思是“现在能够”.也许是把最后一个词 him 改为 others,意思是“我很高兴能为他人作点事情.”