介是你自己写的还是改错文章题呢...
我觉得有些地方用词不太恰当 但又不能说有语法错误
puppy love is not right, but it is a normal thing in the process of growing up. the most important problem(此处缺少主语了 应加个名词) is how to deal with it. if we tackle with it carelessly, we will be sad in the future and will regard it as a shame in our lives. so i hope everyone who is a student can handle feelings wisely in order to enjoy the seasons in the sun.
本人水平有限呐 要我按照你的意思改改 也就这样啦..~~~~(>_