One day,while my friend and i was（改为were） travelling through germary,we were not （去掉not）very hungry but we only had a little money We decided stop（改为to stop） at a village maket to buy something to eat we choose（改为chose） the cheapest biscuits and ate it（改为them） under a tree
We thought the biscuits were great .Let is（改为us） got （改为get）some more .They are cheap and they really taste well（改为good）. My friend could read some German, but i could not,and i gave her the biscuit bag to find a name she looked at it and stared(改为started） to laugh . how （改为Why）are you laughing i said(改为asked） because they're dog biscuit she said
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