Regard (应该用Regarding) the meeting with your ABC Co.CFO - Mr Fang on 18 Oct 07,I have booked 0110 Room at (用on) 11F in our office (office只是一间办公室,如果是办公楼,用office tower).
Please review the following address information,(这里一句已经完了,用句号) if you have any query,please let me know freely.(比较习惯用feel free to let me know)