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Frozen is a very exciting movie. I think we should learn from Anna. Never give up.Here is what happened.
Elsaand Anna were princess of Arendelle. Elsa could do a magic. One day, she hurts Anna. It’s lucky because Elsa just hurts Anna’s head. So Anna healed. But the gate of the castle is closed.
Many years later, the gate opened. Because it’s Elsa’s coronation day. Anna met a prince named Hans. She thinks Hans is her true love. So she brought Hans to see Elsa. But Elsa couldn’t accept that. And she froze the Arendelle. Then she ran away. Anna wanted Arendelle to come back to summer.So she decided to find her sister. She met Kristoff, reindeer Sven and snowman Olaf. Eventually, they found Elsa. But Elsa froze Anna’s heart. And Marshmallow threw them out of Elsa’s castle.
Kristoff took Anna to see his friends——Trolls.They said only true love could save Anna. But Hans didn’t love Anna. He longed for the throne. And he intended to murder Elsa! Anna saved Elsa. But Anna was frozen by her sister. An act of true love will thaw a frozen heart! Anna was back. Finally, the kingdom came back into summer.
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