请牛人帮忙看看下面写的有没有错的地方帮忙改正

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  • Today,we (这里如果是将要讨论这个内容的话,要用we are going to talk about)talk about how to make an appointment with a doctor.In America,it's almost like a rule that you should make an appointment before seeing the doctor if you are sick.There is a exceptional case if you got acute disease :you can go ask for treatment directly.

    The following conversation will teach us how to make an appointment through the phone (既然预约肯定是病了,所以不用重复比较好~).

    Please listen to me:

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    This dialogue contains some new words and phrases,i will explain right now(或者at this moment).

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    .the sentence is content of this class.(不确定你这里要说什么,只有一句话么?不过这句语法没什么问题)

    .ok.This class gives us the knowledge of seeing a doctor by making an appointment first.Please keep this fresh in mind.

    有些句子大体没什么问题不过我还是改了,因为说起来非常不顺畅,太过书面.

    如果有任何问题,欢迎追问~