你应该说明这个短文可以改几处.这种情况下,我改：after school 变成school was over.这样是不是更通顺一些”一天,放学了,所有的学生都冲出了教室“.你原句是”一天,放学后,所有的学生都冲出了教室.“因为放学后是一段时间,后面的动作是瞬间动作,不搭.改成”放学了“,是点时间,就可以和后面的瞬间动作”冲出教室“搭配了.你说呢?
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