楼上滴,
就是 can you tell me how i can get my friend back?这句是对的.
can you tell me后面句子是陈述语序~
第二个也是对的,would like do sth,..
there are many beautiful places,some make you linger from
我觉得应该是 There are many beautiful places,some of which make you ...那是两个句子,说着加句号分成两句.不过我觉得我那样改的更标准~
I also want to help you,but how can I help you do
应该是but how can I help you,
each response may be a long time
我觉得 may take a long time 要好点吧~