There are many ways to go to school,such as going by bike,by bus.by car or on foot.But I like going to school on foot.Because this is a relaxing way,I can talk with my classmates on the way,that's so much fun.And it's also a way to lose my weight and keep healthy.Thirdly it's a Green way.Going to school on foot cause less pollution.
我觉得这样写就可以了吧