As my friend is in avour of your company,he would like to apply to you for a position .His name is Li MIng ,born in Qi Dong Jiangsu,China on August 21st,1980 .Though a chinese national ,he can speak not only Chinese but also has a good command of English.In addition ,he can speak some Janpanse and German After graduating from university ,he became a lawyer and got married .He has there years' work experience and all his bosses are satisfied with him .Getting alone well with people ,being firendly to people and working hard,he is thought highly of by others.I am looking forward to your early reply.I am sure he will be fit for the position he applies to.
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