these is a dead grubby house-fly中these改为there
by my mom's said中said改为words
I really afraid maggots to death应改为I'm really afraid of maggots' death.
My mom continue said改为 My mom continue saying
I don't make a serious中don't 改为didn't
heaven knows 好像没有这么说的吧
that's really surprise me!中surprise是动词,应改为that really surprised me
最后一句话肯定是错的,但怎么改我就没有头绪了-_-.sorry!::>_