求帮忙改正英语作文,Dear Kate,Thank you for you Email.Now i would like

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  • Dear Kate,

    Thank you for you(your) Email.Now i would like to tell you something about the extracurricular reading in our school.my classmates prefer to play basketball and play computer games than to read books(prefer playing basektball and playing computer games than reading books).

    In my opinion,playing computer games not only takes much(a lot of) time but also is harmful to health.But in this age of information and communication,the computer plays an extremely important role .

    Fortunately,reading is my favorite hobby .I can never(can't) stop the love for reading because books are like a wise teacher in my life .As we know(As we all know) ,books are the source of knowledge .I benefit a great deal from reading .

    So i think reading is good for our study and life .

    Best wishes!

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