My mother’s day
My mother is an （原文为a，错误。因为English读音以元间开头）English teacher and she likes listening to （listen为不及物动词，后跟名词时要用固定搭配listen to）English radio and reading English newspaper. She always gets （原文拼写错误）up early in the morning. She washes（wash的主语为第三人称时的动词形式是后面加es） her face and has breakfast, then she hurriedly goes（go的主语为第三人称时的动词形式是后面加es） to school. She does morning exercises with her students. Next, she has one or two（原文拼写错误） English lessons. In the afternoon, she helps some students with their English（去掉their，help…with后直接接名词）. Finally, she goes home at five o’clock. She marks the student’s（改为students’。应是“学生们”（即student复数）的作业） homework at home and she always（在前面增加is，因为tired是形容词，） tired everyday.（应当every day。因为everyday是“日常的”，而每天要用every day） I love my mother and I hope she can just relax（加herself，因为relax是及物动词，后面必须跟名词） at the weekend.（应当改为at weekends，at the weekend指在特定的某个周末，而是指at weekends在绝大多数的周末）