1.You need to buy a car and take the test for licence.
2.第二句后面 GOT与前面GET有些重复.不妨改成 But I haven't managed to make it.
3.对的
4.对的,couldn't 语气比can't委婉
5.No. I am just telling the truth.
6.Well. Maybe ,rather than looking for a girlfriend,fishing is more suitable for me.
7.对的
8.I think so 改成 I suppose. 这个用的频率少些,前者用烂了
9.对的
10.I have to go home to prepare for fishing tomorrow.
11.这个太中式英语了. 就直 接改成 Good luck.
12.I will call you after I come back from my dad's .
13.没错,不过改成这样会更好 All right. I am looking forward to your phone call.