1、Some people consider that it's better to be busy,because in this way they can make life rich.
2、Some people enjoy leisure,thinking that only after one knows how to relax will he or she know how to work.
3、Pressure/Stress is everywhere.
4、Pressure has its advantages and disadvantages.
5、Some think that diploma is good.Good work depends all on good diploma.
6、Some think that ability is the most important.The efficiency of work depends on one's ability.
语法应该没错,不过可能不是最好的.