初二英语作文,帮我修改一下,急用

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  • Winter Vacation is coming.

    This time I want to do something meaningful.

    I'm going to spend an hour reading every day.

    Because I want to learn new things from the books.

    I think it is the most important thing to learn.

    And I think having a strong body is as important as our learning.

    So I'm going to eat an apple every day,because an apple a day keeps the doctor away.

    This is my winter vacation's plan.

    That sounds really great.I can't wait for it.

    呃.以上改正了语法错误.以下润色下表达,以供参考.

    Winter Vacation is just around the corner.

    This time I want to do something meaningful.

    I'm going to spend an hour reading every day because I want to learn new things from the books.

    I think learning is such an important thing.

    And I also think having a strong body is as important as our learning.

    So I'm going to have an apple every day,because an apple a day keeps the doctor away,as the saying is(就像俗话说的).

    This is my winter vacation's plan.

    That sounds so great that I can't wait for it.