Michael was walking along the street (+the)other day.
Then he felt someone shouting his name.
【the other day:在某天】
He stopped and looked around.He(It) was
【这里用It was 表示“是”,因为不清楚性别时不能用he或者she】
Jack were(were-) running after him.
【这里running after him应为宾补或定语,宾补就直接去掉were,定语从句则在were前加who】
Michael and Jack went(had gone) to the same school
【这里去到同所学校是发生在过去的过去,所以应用过去完成时】
and then to (to-)the same university.
【and then是并列,是the same school 和the same university并列,所以后一个to】
So(But) they hadn’t met each other since then.(标点错了?)
【这里表示转折,不是因果,所以要用But】
They decide(decided) to have lunch together .
【典型的时态错误,本文是发生在过去的,所以通篇的时态基本和过去有关】
They went(这是你打错了吧?) to the nearest restaurant and sat by (at)the table near the window.
【说坐在桌边是“sit at the table”,算是习惯搭配,因为介词的用法是很复杂的,所以你不必太纠结于为什么】
Then they talked about that(what) they had done
【about后是宾语,应用名词性从句,而引导名词性从句的就是what、where、who这些疑问代词,所以此处用what】
since they graduated(+from) university.
【graduate from,从……毕业,固定搭配】
我给你大致分析了一下,但是并不保证正确,剩下的,就交给你自己判断吧.答案不一定是最重要的,“为什么”也很重要.
P.S楼上说的很对,这篇短文好烂~