Perhaps my dream big people will find it ridiculous,语法有错误,改为perhaps big people will find my dream ridiculous.
My dream is to want to have a folk life 改为Mydream is to have a folk life
but also the colors are bleak改为but also bleak colors
I do not rule out the painting is part of the black语法也有误
下面还有好几处,汉式英语居多