My Best Friend
A friend is a person who can let you feel warm when you are depressed.So I have many friends.But XXX is my best friend.He is as old as me.He taller than me.Basketball is his favorite sport.We are in the same class.He is good at study.So his study is very good.We learn from each other and help each other.He will help me if i got in trouble.I will help he as much as I can.I hope our friendship will forever and ever.
A friend is someone who can let you feel warm when you are depressed.I have many friends.However I only have one best friend and it's XXX.He is the same age as me.He is taller than me.Basketball is his favourite sport.We are in the same class.He likes studying and is good at it,so he gets high marks.We learn from each other and help each other.He will help me if I ever get into troubles.So will I.I hope our friendship will last forever and ever.
A person改成someone更好一些,someone也是一个人的意思,但是更正规些.So可以删掉.But XXX is my best friend.我改成了However I only have one best friend and it's XXX.但是我只有一个最好的朋友,他是XXX.他比我高的那句话里要加个is.后面有的地方我也稍微修改了一下.最后一句话我加了个last,直接说forever的话不通顺.
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