Shanghai lies in East China.
And it is famous for it night views and shopping centers.
It is also one of the largest cities in the world.
It is known as the''Shopping Paradise''because there are a lot of department stores and huge shopping centers.If you come to Shanghai,I recommend you that you can go to the Beach at night and you can see the Oriental Pearl TV Tower.
At the daytime,you can go to People's Square,the ChengHuang Temple and many other places of interest.
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