My pocket full with moneys.
full with改为is full of.
2.Under the help of the teacher,he catch up with others students at the end.
catch改为caught,过去式.
3.We should keep quietly and listen careful in the class.
quietly改为quiet,用形容词.
4.You had better to take the map with you such that you willn't get lose(4处错了）
去掉to,such - so,willn't - won't,lose-lost.
5.To him surprised ,his daughter can singing English song.(5处错了）
him-his,surprised-surprise,can-could,singing-sing,song-songs.
6.He's father don't like listen music ,he like chat with other online(7处错了）
He's-His.don't-doesn't,listen-listening,在music前加上to,like-likes,chat-chatting,other加上s.
7.There are such many homework that we can't go out to play.
are-is.such-so,many-much
8.The woman that we often talk is ours teacher.
that-whom,talk-talk aboout,ours去掉s.
9.The school that we study two years ago is more beautiful.
that-where,study-studied.
10.The doctor whom is talking with you is famous.
whom-who.
11.The work must finish in two days.
finish-be finished.