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Dear Susan, Jul. 2nd
I have planned to go to Canada this summer holiday and I have got my plane ticket this morning.
I'll take Flight NW 1702 to Canada on Jul. 23rd. The plane takes off at 10:30 am from Beijing
International Airport. The first stop is Vancouver, where I'll have to stay about an hour. And then it
continues its flight and arrives at Toronto Airport. The whole journey will last about 18 hours. Will
you be kind enough to meet me at the Airport when I arrive there?
Thank you !
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua