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In addition,the elevator will be lifted by the uplift force.
it is also intended to use the solar power.(去掉also)
第10段
much climate and culture considerations（many)
and(去掉and,重新起一句大写 Because) there are not much climate and culture considerations,so they will be suitable to be applied in ANSI.
第11段
It(that) is because the energy needed to pump around 100 m3 water will be much bigger(much more ) than to operate 100w light
第12段
From the literature review,the researcher has learned some advance technology（加复数） related to water and has（去掉and has 改逗号） studied some (a plenty of 代替some )sample waterscape and energy efficient design projects.some sample waterscape and energy efficient design projects
第13段
First of all,（去掉）（加Although,there have already been some advanced water systems used for water treatment,water utilization,and water celebration,(a few of them can be applied directly in ANSI.
However,(逗号）most of them need to be revised and integrated in order to have more(改comprehensive) functions.
also,（改大写 Also) further design need to be done to integrate these systems to the building structure and the landscape structure.
第14段
In addition (改为 further more )
As a result(改为 Therefore)
As a result,this research is going to analyse the design process and contribute (去掉 will)to design learning and teaching.