I gently invite him to clubs,matches,and some activities he is interested in and in these places may he widen his circles in his favor.
可以分为两句话并列.后一句我用了倒装.
我认为自己在里面改了一些更为合适的词
I gently invite him to clubs,matches,and some activities he is interested in and in these places may he widen his circles in his favor.
可以分为两句话并列.后一句我用了倒装.
我认为自己在里面改了一些更为合适的词