i really appreciate your kind（改成kindness）
now i am getting on quite good（改成well） with
that is my major（改成majority）
i'm making progresses （改成progress）
.only by working hard can i（改成I can） help with those in need.
what's more,i've made up mime（改成my mind） to my hometown before（改成after） graduation and devote myself to make（改成making） it more prosperous and beautiful.
.words seemed（改成seem） to fail me
express my thanks for（改成to） you
认真修改完,望采纳,谢谢~~~