错误有点多,一个一个指出来太麻烦了,我修改了一下重新打一遍吧.
I don't believe there are any treasures that people can find.Even if they are found by someone so many years after being buried,they must has been corrupted.So I never hope I can find any.However,in fact we can often see another kind of treasure which is easy to get in our life.It is knowledge.Everyone may know some words that you have never seen before.I think the fastest way to understand them is to search them on the dictionary.I used to depend on the paper dictionary,but now I have an E-book.It is lighter,stonger and more convenient than the paper one,and it is the most useful revealer for me in study now.The E-book helps me acquire knowledge more easily.
As we all know（众所周知）,knowledge is useful.When we grow up,we need to get a job,and the more knowledge we have learned,the more things we can try.Anyway,knowledge can help increase your value.For example,it helps you find treasures (if there are any),invent something to sell and so on.In my opinion（在我看来,依我之见,等于As far as I'm concerned),the worthless thing is to spend your time on the soap operas.They can tell you nothing but the relationship between a mother and a daughter-in-law,which is absurd and trivial (琐碎的）.Take The Man from the Star (此处用斜体,英文中没有书名号,用首字母大写和斜体表示,注意介词和定冠词the和不定冠词的首字母不大写）,a popular South Korean TV series,for an example.It's impossible in life,and I only consider it as a joke.Basically soap operas can't teach us any useful knowledge.Only books can teach us how the world changes and how things develop.
注意一下大小写和单词拼写错误,另外,最主要的问题就是定语从句的用法,作为宾语的it被重复使用,导致成分赘余.for example后面常用逗号而非冒号,而且接一整句而非短语,接短语可用Take sth for an example来举例.为使文章意思表述更流畅完整,要多用些常见短语和连接词.虽然有些不足之处,但对于英语初学者而言这篇文章写的很好了,再接再厉!