作文写得很好啊.看出来你很有写作功底的.写得也非常扣题.我可能写不出这样的作文来,因为里面的词汇用得都很“高级”.不过中间那一段,在说住在城市的不便之处时,只是重点说了城市的交通不方便,而其他的没有提及,其实还是有很多可写的.例如,在大城市看病,小孩上幼儿园等等.我可以写一个简单点的.跟这个差不多.
Living in the city-A crazy thought
There are more and more people in the city now ,and the city has become more and more crowded.Wherever you go,you'll see people,people,people.Some city-dwellers(或Some people in the city) have to choose the suburbs as their residence.
It's not strange for them to complain about the living conditions in the city.Taking a bus or subway in the rush hours is like a fierce fight in the crowd,and everyone loses his gent in order to get a stand room in the vehicle.It's a grand and specific scence in the city.As for the traffic on the road,it can't be worse.The road has virtually become a tin and the car couldn't move at all.
In other respects,like seeing a doctor even for a slight disease,such as a fever or a cold,it 'll take you hours to register(挂号) in the hospital.Let alone the serious diseases,you may wait a couple of days before you get the appointment with the doctor.
Education for the young children is one of the sharpest problems in the city too.Finding a kindergarten for their babies is so hard,because of the scarcity of the rooms and resources for more children in the kindergartens,that some parents have to queue up days before to gain the admission to the kindergarten.
There are some other problems in the city ,like the environmental pollutions,especially in the industry cities.And the continuous noises seem to never stop which make the people feel dizzy or upset.
Living in the city is a dream decades ago for the people living in the country or the suburbs,but it now seems that it will become a nightmare if the problems above would not be settled or at least relieved.It's a long-term existing problem and at present it's a crazy thought to live in the large modern city.