1.不可以,这需要好好分析下句子的成分
with its cycles of instruction so carefully worked out 这是with复合结构,做定语修饰education
so carefully worked out和punctuated by textbooks为过去分词短语作定语,都修饰前面的 its cycles of instruction
those purchasable wells of wisdom作textbooks的同位语
最后一句的意思是：如果不接受教育,文明将会是个什么样子呢?
2.首先句子的主干no necessity results in neglect of children
no neccessity 是主语
of making a living away from home 是修饰主语的定语
result in 是谓语 也是固定搭配
neglect of children 是宾语
为生计而背井离乡是没有必要的,因为背井离乡导致了孩子们疏于看管”