We came another suggestion.
=>We came for another suggestion.
(用for 表目的)
You should concentrate about what the teacher says in class.
=>You should concentrate on what the teacher says in class.
（ concentrate on是固定用法“集中注意力于.”）
We should have positive attitude for life.
=>We should have a positive attitude for life.
(have a positive attitude for...也是固定说法“对.有一个积极的态度”)
People are often mistaken in thinking that those with high IQs always have high EQs as well as.
=>People are often mistaken in thinking that those with high IQs always have high EQs as well .
（as well as后面要接名词或者别的什么词,而 as well后就不用）
Do not read in the sun.It's not good to your eyes.
=>Do not read in the sun.It's not good for your eyes.
（be good for..."对.有好处"; be good to..."对……友好"）
He desired that we can go there on time.
=>He desired that we should go there on time.
(desire 和suggest,order,command等 一样,后面接的宾语从句的谓语动词要用should do,should 可以省略)
You can never imagine Peter sail across the Atlantic Ocean in only five days.
=>You can never imagine Peter sailing across the Atlantic Ocean in only five days.
（固定搭配 imagine (sb.) doing sth.）
The man stood by the door is my father.
=>The man standing by the door is my father.
（考查非谓语动词.the man 和stand 是主动关系,所以要用 doing 形式,即standing）
I drove all the way home,listened to music.
=>I drove all the way home,listening to music.
（考查非谓语动词.i 和listen 是主动关系,用doing 形式,即listening）
The teacher had her mouth wide open,surprising I got the answer.
=>The teacher had her mouth wide open,surprised at the fact that I got the answer.
（我们可以说sth.surprise sb.,或者sb.be surprised at sth.,这题的逻辑主语是the teacher,所以 用surprised ,但是surprise at (that) i got the answer 这种表达是不对的,因为介词后面不用that引导的宾语从句,所以我们可以加上the fact,此时的that i got the answer 是做the fact 的同位语从句.)