英语专业路过～
问题如下：
1.school makes rules这句,建议改为：But we all know,the rules school made is good for us.
2.follow the rules,用obey the rules更好
3.get up early before seven...那个and是不需要的,后面最好再加上 on time,准时到校
4.we can't fight with everyone,改为Fighting is not allowed.祈使句显得更为有力
5.听音乐那句改为listening music in the classroom is not allowed also