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1 an
2 left--- to left
3 去掉后面的I don't like
4 were--- was
5 hobbies
6 studies
7 After that Tim called his friend.
我提醒你,改错要看整个句子的,你的句子是完整写出来了吗?
短文：
Today we went to the zoo.First we take the bus to the zoo.Then we visited those annimals.Likes lions,tigers,pandas,giraffes.Next we bought some food and gave them to the annimals.After that we are all hugry,then we went to the shop.We bought some bread,some jiuce,and some biscuits.When the sun was down,we went home by bus.What a intresting day !
你应该是学生吧,我有照顾你的水平哟