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How to protect wildlife animals
Many wild animals are in danger, because the environment that they are living in has changed a lot. For example, with the development of cities ,the air is polluted and water is not clean any more, wild animals’ living places are also polluted badly. Many of them don’t have enough food to eat. At the same time, many people kill some special animals for their fur, skin, teeth and meat.
As we all know, animals are our friends,Human beings can’t live without plants and animals. We should plant more trees to make homes for wild animals and stop animals from being killed. If there are more plants and more wildlife animals, the world will be more beautiful . So protecting wildlife animals is very important, Let’s work together to protect the wildlife animals.
考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍为什么有些野生动物处于危险中,为什么保护野生动物很重要,我们应该采取什么措施来保护野生动物。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
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