I have been （1 learned -> learning ) it from the internet that you want to make a Chinese friend (2 so that-> in order ) to learn the Chinese language and culture .im glad that you show so great interest in china and I‘d like to be your( 3 friends-> friend ) .
I will try to write to you as often as ( 4 possibly ->possible ) about the chinese culture .（4 when -> If ) you have a chance(6 come -> to come ) to China ,i"ll teach you how to(7 say -> speak ) Chinese.i"ll also try to show you (8 in-> around ) some famous ( 9place -> places ) of interest .anyway ,i am going to help you as much as i can .how do you think im looking forward to ( 10 hear -> hearing ) from you.
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