直接改在原文里了,希望能帮上忙.
Dear Tom,
In your last e-mail you said you were coming to China because you wanted to visit some famous places in China.How about spending some days with me in my hometown?There are many places of interest in my hometown.I am sure you will show great interest in them.I'll show you around the town.You can stay in a hotel or share a room with me.My mother speaks English since she is an English teacher,so we can communicate with each other well.Besides,my mother cooks delicious Chinese food.I'm sure you will like your stay in my home.