帮忙看一下这句话语法哪里错误了Further,they will be bored to death and don't

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  • 语法方面的问题:

    1.they will be bored to death and don't know - don't 应改为won't 这里and连接并列结构,时态应该一致

    2.or their phone batteries - 有歧义.不明确是their phone batteries和phones并列还是前后两个从句并列,建议改为or when their phone batteries run down

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