Last Sunday I saw a worst storm in years. It came sudden and went on for
the suddenly
over three hours. After lunch, I went into my room to have a rest. The air
was hotter , and all is quiet. Then a strong wind started to blow into my
hot was
room. Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air and some flew out
∧the open window. As I ran outto catch them, big drop of rain began to
ofdrops
fall. When I came back into ∧ house, it was raining harder and harder. I tried
my
very hard to close the window. Then I heard a loudly crashingsound from
loud
the back of the house. When I ran out of my room to find out what had happened:
a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom.
broken
有具体的语言环境可知形容词的最高级worst前的修饰词，必须是the；
从文中的it came 可知需要副词来修饰动词came，所以sudden改为suddenly；
主要测试具体语境，此处没有比较的意思，也没有相比的对象，形容词的比较级hotter改为hot；主要测试全篇文章的时态一致性：一般过去时；主要测试介词后方可接宾语；
从句子Pieces of paper on my desk flew high into the air以及and 也可看出此处需要介词，方可后接the open window；
主要测试具体的语境理我跑出去捡纸，这时天开始下雨；
从文中的句子：When I came back into house可知，可数名词house 的前面需要限定词修饰。另外注意代词的一致性；主要测试名词前面的修饰语：形容词。修饰名词的时候只能用形容词；
由文章可知句子：When I ran out of my room to find out what had happened:属于单句，根本不需要连词，故此我很多余；
主要考查句子：a big tree had fallen down and broke the top of the backroom关键词的把握。注意句子中的并列连词：and，其前后的成分属于相同的。