Question

初中英语作文,希望得到大大的修改!马上就要,

Answer 1

. you can see a hardworking girl studying busily.

这句有点Chinese English,我建议用there be句型there is a hardworking girl.

buys some exercise books to improve her marks

目的不准确,最好是do some exercises

is what i learn from

I

修改下会是不错的文章!