see改为watch或enjoy,因为see是“看到”,一般当短暂性动词用（不过see a film也对,呵呵）
there are many interesting story 的story改为stories,复数啊
From Xipi and Erhuang前面的句号不能有吧,这样这就是一个独立的词组了,不是句子,不能单独用
最后两句语法上没什么错误,但and太多,要换一下,It is also famous in the world .In fact it's very popular with most old men and women,as well as many children .