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  • What does love truly mean?What (it means 改为 does it mean) to be in love?Before I read this poem,I haven’t really considered about love,especially in relationships with someone.But after (要加I have) read this poem,I realized that we can use different way to look at love.

    In this love poem by Sandra Cisneros,the author gives us so many idea(ideas) about the different meaning of love.Specifically(Especially) she shows that boys and girls in a relationship with different kinds of emotions ,love could be like crazy and dangerous,love is an adventure and risky.The author applies many single words and items(应该用terms) to correlate the relationship(s) and paradoxes between the two lovers.In the poem,a red flag can symbolize danger and a warning.Chemical may symbolize the chemical reaction and chemical change.

    An axe and a bruised thumb symbolize aggressive,breaks or splits things.

    Pas de deux symbolize the ballet dance for two people.The author use(uses) metaphysic to describe a couple lover’s relationships.

    以上只是序述那首诗,下而我替你加上一小段conculsion:

    So,love can a a beautiful thing for both boys and the girls,if they have found their true match — their Mr Right or Mrs Right.But most of time,two lovers began with hot relationships and ended up badly or even tragically.Looking for true love and the right person to love and the person would love you back the same is a very difficult thing,sometimes even kind of impossible for some those with strange characters.Therefore,although there are 7 billion people in this world,there could be only one or none is your true match and if there is you have to find and indentify him / her!

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