1. The innovation lab is equipped with general electronic equipments and instruments,
equipment是集合名词,不用复数形式.
2. a complete set of Fast PCB Plate Rolling and some related books.
PCB Plate Rolling 是否要表达“中厚钢板轧制的印刷线路板”,如果是这样,修饰关系不对,可以改为 Plate Rolling PCB 或 PCB of Plate Rolling
related books 可能是指参考书,改为 related reference books(相关的参考书)
3. It aims at offering senior students a multifunctional and open experimental environment ,
It aims at 最好直接用 the aim (或 purpose) of the lab is at ... 或者 its aim is at ...
以下的句子没有问题.