英语作文评析,并指出错误 正文如下,

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  • 1small和cute位置调换

    这是形容词位置摆放原则

    2on the tree介词改为in

    3through改成throw,throw才是扔的意思 而且过去式是threw

    4The bird noticed that what the boy to do.The bird was

    about to fly away when the stone hit it .

    这句话替换the bird wanted …到faster than the bird

    5fell down the tree,down后加from

    6soon改成in this time

    7改为kind那前面也该加to

    to be kind of

    8asked 后的he 用宾格him

    asked him to take it to home